Hey Callum,
Your blog post provides a compelling and personal perspective on how mental health affects performance in sports. The use of first-hand experiences and statistics makes your argument highly effective, particularly when comparing your two seasons at UVIC. The way you highlighted the connection between confidence, mental clarity, and on-field performance is especially strong, showing that mental well-being is just as crucial as physical ability in high-level athletics.
I also appreciate how you connected your experiences to broader themes of active health, including social and community well-being. The discussion about the support from family, friends, teammates, and coaches reinforces the idea that a strong support system plays a key role in maintaining mental well-being.
One way to strengthen this post could be to incorporate expert insights or research on mental health in sports to further validate your points. However, the personal storytelling already makes this post engaging and impactful. Overall, I think you did a fantastic job of illustrating why mental health is essential for athletic success and I am excited to hear more in your presentation.